Comments on: Fourth Writing Assignement: The Personal Essay http://vanilde.edublogs.org/2008/09/25/fourth-narrative/ Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Fri, 12 Dec 2008 14:05:06 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: TEACHER http://vanilde.edublogs.org/2008/09/25/fourth-narrative/comment-page-1/#comment-4 TEACHER Tue, 30 Sep 2008 15:31:00 +0000 http://vanilde.edublogs.org/?p=7#comment-4 Hi Vanilde, This essay is well-organized and presents good arguments. However, you nedd to review the sentence structures and the vocabulary choices. Please, rewrite the text and show it to me again, Best wishes, You teacher Hi Vanilde,

This essay is well-organized and presents good arguments. However, you nedd to review the sentence structures and the vocabulary choices. Please, rewrite the text and show it to me again,
Best wishes,
You teacher

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