http://vanilde.edublogs.org/2008/09/25/second-writing-assignment-essay/ Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Fri, 12 Dec 2008 14:05:06 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://vanilde.edublogs.org/2008/09/25/second-writing-assignment-essay/comment-page-1/#comment-5 TEACHER Tue, 30 Sep 2008 15:34:29 +0000 http://vanilde.edublogs.org/?p=3#comment-5 Again, Vanilde, this essay is well-organized and has good arguments. But you need to review the sentence structures and the vocabulary choices. Please, rewrite the composition and show it to me again, Best wishes, You teacher Again, Vanilde, this essay is well-organized and has good arguments. But you need to review the sentence structures and the vocabulary choices. Please, rewrite the composition and show it to me again,
Best wishes,
You teacher

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