Third Writing Assignment: Essay.
Thursday September 25th 2008, 10:30 pm
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 Goiania

In this text I will talk about Goiania, the beautiful and green capital of Goias, a state that is in heart of Brazil.

Goiania is a city full of charm, it’s situated in the central region of Brazil it has a pleasant tropical climate and gardens full of all kinds of tropical flowers.

Goiania can be considered a touristic city because in it has many beautiful and friendly people and counts on one of the excelent structure to receive tourists of the whole world with excellent hotels, restaurants, Convention Center and Cultural Centers.  

In Goiania there are too, large and cozy shopping centers, movies, theatres and many bars to everyone meet for a happy hour every afternoon.

Woods and parks become Goiania in a decorated city during all the year. Among them there is the Botanic Garden with two parts: one open to public visitation and other part considered as a biological reserve.

Goiania counts with many cultural centers and other place to do all kinds of cultural events and business events. Besides, there are museums to show the people’s history. There is too an important and particular museum, the Ornithological Museum with animals of the “cerrado”.

Every visitor that came to Goiania will never forget its pleasant  restaurants that make typical foods with exotic animals and fruits of that Brazil central region.

In Goiania there are all things that I sad and much more to see. Everybody might come here to know it better.

 





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Hi Vanilde,

Your essay starts very well!!! But then, it seems that you have mixed Portuguese and English structures.
Please, have a look at the paragraphs below and check the following items: sentence structure, verb tense and vocabulary.

“Goiania can be considered a touristic city because has in it many beautiful and friendly people and counts on one of the best structure to have tourists of the whole world with excellent hotels, restaurants, Convention Center and Cultural Centers.

In Goiania there are too, large and cozy shopping centers, movies, theatres and many bars to everyone meet to a happy hour every afternoon.

Woods and parks become Goiania in a decorated during all the year. Among them there is the Botanic Garden with two parts: one open to public visitation and other part considered as a biological reserve.

Goiania counts on many cultural centers and other place to do all kinds of cultural events and business events. Besides, there are museums to show the people’s history. There is too an important and particular museum, the Ornithological Museum with animals of the “cerrado”.

Every visitor that came to Goiania will never forget of the typical food’s restaurants that make foods with exotic animals and fruits.

In Goiania there are all things that I sad and much more to see. Everybody might come here to know it better.”

After you finish the revision, please let me know,
Best ,
Your teacher

Comment by    TEACHER 09.30.08 @ 8:26 am



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